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I say its a good start.

Not that bad of a flash really to be honest. I found it funny, you just need to work on the sound and voices some more, there a little loud even with my computers volume turned down. As for the animation, well you clearly know the basics and know how to use them well to an extent. So really just keep practicing your art and animation style and I bet good things will come of it.

Skal42 responds:

Thanks for the tip, ill work a bit harder on the sounds next time :)

Youtube..........

Is where this goes, not Newgrounds.

TheTrueTombo responds:

it's flash video lol

A bit lame if you ask me.

Its just a few not very impressive 3-D pictures of the easiest to rip-off concept with no animation.

adollfo responds:

???

A decent idea

Theres nothing wrong with frame by frame movies. Honestly I think this is a pretty good idea, maybe give some back story, make it longer, ya know build on it and you just might have something pretty good here.

PinkSkull responds:

Thanks, I may do it some day :)

Its decent.

It runs kinda slow, but it is a decent movie.

Joe0208 responds:

as above! thanks for saying it was decent!

Its okay

But why didnt you do any more then just that?

10JD responds:

cause im crazy!

It has some potential I think.

But there is alot to work on, such as voice overs they really need improvement. Maybe try getting outside help instead of doing them all yourself and try not putting your mouth so close to the microphone. Then there is the music, try finding something less annoying and please turn it down, nobody likes loud annoying music. The story sounds kinda interesting but a little cheesy at the same time but you might be able to go somewhere with it maybe.

Feyvern responds:

Naw, when I DO the next one, I'll put no voice overs,since there's not much people around to do voices(Like my friend-who did all the voice over with that stupid microphone he has).Thats the funny part, he doesn't talk to close to it,He has that stupid fan way to close to the microphone, and he talks to damn loud -_-.I agree with the music to. Yeah he doesn't make good stories -_-. But when i start making part 2..I'll make it more interesting instead of making stories that lack elements.

You ripped this off

This is ripped off from Grand Theft Auto.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

the fernando in gta has been shown to me, i think his accent sounds way better than mine! in any case, fernando has been appearing in my flashes for about 3 years now, he's a fairly fleshed out character.

I'm sorry.

This would have been really cool if you finished it. To submit it just because you didnt want it to rot in your hard drive forever isn't a good enough reason for me so sorry for giving this a low score.

GarrettCGA responds:

Rate it from what we have, not because the fact its not finished.

Voice and plot

If you work on your voice overs and a plot for the story, this could turn out pretty good.

SSNegaDrain responds:

im not planning to make a story or a series out of this im afraid, this is a collab entry.

but because people keep saying i could make a series and i need a plot im making a series now called "cult ninja" its xiao xiao like, and it wont have those voice overs, (i will try and do them this time...)

thx for your review man :)

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